My other screenplay idea

[DrPsychoSpaz]

Ok, me and my friends are getting together and making a movie. Right now we are writing it and I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions. Here it is:

Ok, one of my friends' ex has been stalking her. He reads her notes OVER AND OVER everyday and once she caught him watching her through her computer room window. In the movie, we would exaggerate things (i.e. he tries to kill her new guy and stuff) and basically looses it (not that he hasn't already in real life). So, basically we have an obessed lover (who's "never gonna go out with anyother woman" because he is SOOO in love with her), the sexy girl and her boyfriend who are being stalked and threatened. Then, it gets weird. The hopeless lover casts a wiccan hex on the boyfriend and later summons a demon to help him win back his girl. The lover gets possesed and things start to get a little scary. Any thoughts?

[WUXflooble]

Well done!
You have trully lived up to your name DrPsycoSpaz

[FutureFilmMan]

No offence but drop it unless you're gonna do something spectucular to make the story original then it will be rubbish because the story is to easy to guess.

[eddie]

thats true, but if you saw the plot outline for Evil Dead up on this board Im sure you would say the same thing.....

[Charter]

You've got to tack a good story on it:

A 24 year old breaks up with his "love". You add some of the elements of your idea, and add depth. Like, he loves her because he has creepyly-Sad dreams about someone he never knew, but knows exists-and she looks like the dream-girl. Then, chop out the daemonic crap. Add an edge, like the guy she's dating is his enemy. So, he starts stalking her. Halfway through, he breaks into the house and seriously hurts the boyfriend. Then, after a long investigation, the police find no clues. So, by the end, the girl and the boyfriend are very scared. The stalker calls 911 and tells them the boyfriend's holding her hostage. The police come over and kill the guy. He goes up to the girl's room. Right when He gets in, she drinks some bleach or something. Then, in her last moments, he tells the truth. Halfway through her response, she dies. The Police then come and take him to jail. Then, He wakes up.

Something like that.